The following e-mail message suffers from many writing faults, including poor tone and ineffective persuasive strategy. It originated with a manager and is addressed to her boss. List at least five writing weaknesses.

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Cassius Hines

9 July, 15:40

The following e-mail message suffers from many writing faults, including poor tone and ineffective persuasive strategy. It originated with a manager and is addressed to her boss. List at least five writing weaknesses.

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Chloe Weiss · Answer 1

Writing weakness of the message are listed below:

Subject line of the meeting "Miserable Meetings" contains a negative tone. A message must have a catchy subject line. Opening line of the message is poorly designed. The offensive tone throughout the message is used by the manager. The message contains argumentative and pushy tone. The lack of professional tone. The manager should have used a persuasive tone while writing an email to his boss. The message should include essential facts and figures to support the statements made by the manager.