Read this paragraph and answer the question that follows,

(1) My oldest cousin, Lea, lives on a ranch. (2) I love visiting hert (3) One of the most fabulous things about her life is

that she's around horses every day! (4) Frequent contact with horses is believed to improve a person's mood and

mental state. (5) I love horses, and I'm not kidding when I say that I would live Lea's life in a minute.

Which sentence should be revised because it does not maintain the style and tone of the rest of the paragraph?

sentence 2

sentence 3

sentence 4

sentence 5

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Vance Berg

6 March, 17:46

Read this paragraph and answer the question that follows,

(1) My oldest cousin, Lea, lives on a ranch. (2) I love visiting hert (3) One of the most fabulous things about her life is

that she's around horses every day! (4) Frequent contact with horses is believed to improve a person's mood and

mental state. (5) I love horses, and I'm not kidding when I say that I would live Lea's life in a minute.

Which sentence should be revised because it does not maintain the style and tone of the rest of the paragraph?

sentence 2

sentence 3

sentence 4

sentence 5

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Answers (2)

Know the Answer?

Emiliano Nelson · Answer 1

4

Explanation:

I would say 4 because the paragraph is talking about how she loves horses and wants to be with her cousin on the ranch and its really telling her personal interest and number 4 is more factual and thats not the tone.

Miriam Cuevas · Answer 2

The answer is sentence 4