Which revision fixes the dangling modifier in this sentence?

While walking to school almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow, the weather was miserable.

1) While walking to school almost a mile in the heavy, wet snow, the weather was miserable.

2) While I was walking almost a mile to school, the weather was miserable, with wet, heavy snow.

3) The weather was miserable while walking to school almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow.

4) Almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow, while I was walking to school, the weather was miserable.

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Sutton

28 November, 19:40

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Jaqueline Santos · Answer 1

A. while Walking to school almost a mile in the heavy, wet snow, the weather was miserable

Austin Gamble · Answer 2

The answer would most likely be "The weather was miserable while walking to school almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow."