What do you think about my argumentative essay on vaccination so far? I'm on pro vac

Because of the modern medicine we have today we can prevent communicable diseases from spreading throughout the world. However, many parents are refusing to vaccinate their children because of claims of autism, or other harmful reactions occurring as a result of the vaccination.

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Dawson Walls

20 May, 14:10

What do you think about my argumentative essay on vaccination so far? I'm on pro vac

Because of the modern medicine we have today we can prevent communicable diseases from spreading throughout the world. However, many parents are refusing to vaccinate their children because of claims of autism, or other harmful reactions occurring as a result of the vaccination.

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Virginia Wright · Answer 1

I think that your essay is not long enough but this short argument is leading you to the great essay. I would recommend you to write at first something about vaccinations and how it all started.

Then, you could write more about types of them and why some people are using them, and some people are against them. It is good to have some evidence that will support your arguments. In the end, I would recommend you to write your own opinion on vaccination and how are you feeling about that modern kind of medicine.