Proofread the passage and identify spelling errors and improper use of punctuation. The world today is - filled - with advertisements. We see them on TV, In the newspaper, on the Internet, and and in our surroundings. The

-advertising - industry - effects - the way we look at and judge people around us.

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Alvaro Cox

19 November, 22:23

Proofread the passage and identify spelling errors and improper use of punctuation. The world today is - filled - with advertisements. We see them on TV, In the newspaper, on the Internet, and and in our surroundings. The

-advertising - industry - effects - the way we look at and judge people around us.

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Alonso · Answer 1

The world today is - filled - with advertisements. We see them on TV, In the newspaper, on the Internet, and and in our surroundings. The - advertising - industry - effects - the way we look at and judge people around us.

Explanation:

Error 1: The over extensive use of hyphens throughout the sentence is uncalled for.

Error 2: The words "in" and "internet" should not be capitalized because they are not proper nouns. The only reason that you should have a capitalized word is when it's at the beginning of a sentence, or when it's a proper noun.

Error 3: There's a double "and" in the middle of sentence two.