The musician wrote a new song for his new album to be recorded right after the old album was finished being sold, and he was ready to begin a new album.

Which answer choice revises this sentence into its most concisely written form?

A) The musician wrote a new song.

B) The musician wrote a new song for his upcoming album.

C) The musician wrote a new song right after his old album was sold for money.

D) The musician wrote a new song for his new album that he was now ready to begin.

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Spunky

24 July, 07:41

The musician wrote a new song for his new album to be recorded right after the old album was finished being sold, and he was ready to begin a new album.

Which answer choice revises this sentence into its most concisely written form?

A) The musician wrote a new song.

B) The musician wrote a new song for his upcoming album.

C) The musician wrote a new song right after his old album was sold for money.

D) The musician wrote a new song for his new album that he was now ready to begin.

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Answers (2)

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Hugh · Answer 1

The coreect answer would be B.

Explanation:

The question is basically asking which sentence summurizes the other into a short, sweet, and makes the most sense senstence. While option A. does make sense it is too short and doesnt fully summurize the original sentence, the others dont make much sense leaving option B. as the answer.

Frances Haas · Answer 2

B

Explanation:

The musician wrote a new song for his upcoming album is the correct answer. The other sentences are either too repetitive or omit unnecessary information.