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Jefferson Boyle

12 August, 02:20

Which revision best eliminates wordiness in the following sentence?

Marta was in total agreement with the student council's

position and cast the deciding vote in favor of the rule.

A. Change was in total agreement to "agreed."

B. Change "cast the deciding vote to voted decidingly."

C. Change "student council's position" to "platform."

D. Change in "favor of the rule" to "in favor of change."