Choose one example in either essay of weak, incomplete, or irrelevant evidence and analyze what makes this evidence ineffective. How does the writers choice to include this evidence affect your overall impression of the essay and why?

Plagiarism is a BIG no no. If you're going to read and use someones information on a subject, make sure to tweak it. (Ex. If a piece of information says, "Thomas Edison was a great inventor and a huge genius." You can tweak it by saying., "Thomas Edison was a magnificent inventor and an enormous mastermind." Plagiarism can get you in BIG trouble for; cheating, copying and such.