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2 March, 14:00

Im bad at writing poems is this a good poem? should I add to it in any way or change it?

life is like an hourglass.

Slowly going down the vast

Like playing in the sand

Or walking through the grass

Life goes by so fast

Falling like sand

Try to stop it with your hand

It will eventually overflow

And drop into the below

Often like a desert

The ahead in life is utterly unknown

Just like the sandy biomes weather

Nice and warm in the sunny zone

Or cold and frightening in the night lone

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  1. 2 March, 15:37
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    Yes it is good but you can fix the last stanza by fixing some word other than that its a good poem
  2. 2 March, 17:41
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    I think its good but like the other person said just fix the stanzas
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