Rewrite each of the following sentences removing all redundant expressions

1. We will leave at seven am in the morning and we will depart Indiana

2. I said tell her to come to my house at home.

3. In a moment of panic the general issued the command for his troops to retreat back to the river.

4. For sophomore English class I wrote an autobiographical paper about myself and received a high grade.

5. Among the victims was an infant baby who was taken to Memorial Hospital for treatment.

6. In the report i refer back to the incident that occurred in March of 1897 involving both factions

7. The outer perimeter of the mechanism is hinged on large brass springs that relieve tension

8. Liquid fluids are used to cool the heated metal parts during actual operation

9. Mrs. Sanderson spoke in true honesty when she said she knew nothing about the accident

10. Marty enrolled in an educational school in another state.

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Jacoby Hester

14 March, 17:19

Rewrite each of the following sentences removing all redundant expressions

1. We will leave at seven am in the morning and we will depart Indiana

2. I said tell her to come to my house at home.

3. In a moment of panic the general issued the command for his troops to retreat back to the river.

4. For sophomore English class I wrote an autobiographical paper about myself and received a high grade.

5. Among the victims was an infant baby who was taken to Memorial Hospital for treatment.

6. In the report i refer back to the incident that occurred in March of 1897 involving both factions

7. The outer perimeter of the mechanism is hinged on large brass springs that relieve tension

8. Liquid fluids are used to cool the heated metal parts during actual operation

9. Mrs. Sanderson spoke in true honesty when she said she knew nothing about the accident

10. Marty enrolled in an educational school in another state.

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Miya Cross · Answer 1

1. We will leave at seven in the morning and we will depart Indiana.

2. I said to come to my house.

3. In a moment of panic, the general issued the command for his troops to retreat to the river.

4. For sophomore English class, I wrote an autobiographical paper and received a high grade.

5. Among the victims was an infant who was taken to Memorial Hospital for treatment.

6. In the report, I refer to the incident in March of 1897 involving both factions.

7. The perimeter of the mechanism is hinged on large brass springs that relieve tension.

8. Fluids are used to cool the heated metal parts during actual operation.

9. Mrs. Sanderson spoke in honesty when she said she knew nothing about the accident.

10. Marty enrolled in an school in another state.