Arrange the sentences below to form a logical paragraph. An experienced rock climber knows that it takes a combination of knowledge and preparation to perform a successful climb. A successful climb begins with a proper foothold, carefully placing each foot on a ledge or crack then reaching for a solid hold, and finally pushing off. In addition to a proper foothold, a climber must be careful to check the integrity of the rock before stepping because it has to be solid clear through. A veteran climber judges the integrity of the rock and chooses not to climb on conglomerates, packed clay with lots of little rocks. But, such knowledge of rock is not the only preparation a skilled climber needs; equally important is the correct equipment. With these tools, knowledge of rock composition and equipment safety, a climber may experience many safe and enjoyable climbs.

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Lawrence Martinez

16 June, 10:54

Arrange the sentences below to form a logical paragraph. An experienced rock climber knows that it takes a combination of knowledge and preparation to perform a successful climb. A successful climb begins with a proper foothold, carefully placing each foot on a ledge or crack then reaching for a solid hold, and finally pushing off. In addition to a proper foothold, a climber must be careful to check the integrity of the rock before stepping because it has to be solid clear through. A veteran climber judges the integrity of the rock and chooses not to climb on conglomerates, packed clay with lots of little rocks. But, such knowledge of rock is not the only preparation a skilled climber needs; equally important is the correct equipment. With these tools, knowledge of rock composition and equipment safety, a climber may experience many safe and enjoyable climbs.

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Yael Stevens · Answer 1

An experienced rock climber knows that it takes a combination of knowledge and preparation to perform a successful climb. A successful climb begins with a proper foothold, carefully placing each foot on a ledge or crack then reaching for a solid hold, and finally pushing off. In addition to a proper foothold, a climber must be careful to check the integrity of the rock before stepping because it has to be solid clear through. A veteran climber judges the integrity of the rock and chooses not to climb on conglomerates, packed clay with lots of little rocks. But, such knowledge of rock is not the only preparation a skilled climber needs; equally important is the correct equipment. With these tools, knowledge of rock composition and equipment safety, a climber may experience many safe and enjoyable climbs.

The paragraph already seems to be in the correct order given the sentences in the prompt. The first sentence introduces the idea of a successful climb that continues into the second sentence by explaining what a successful climb is. The third sentence comes out of the second sentence with the phrase "In addition to a proper foothold". The foothold is introduced in sentence 2 then expanded off of in sentence 3. 3 and 4 connect with the "integrity of the rock". Then sentence 5 works as a transition from knowledge of the rock to correct equipment. It seems as though there is a sentence or two missing about the correct equipment needed for rock climbing. Then the last sentence wraps up all of the ideas.