Ead the paragraph from Kevin's personal narrative.

1. When I was in fifth grade, my family became interested in fostering kittens from the local animal shelter. 2. First, we had to fill out an application. 3. Next, we had to attend a workshop on caring for kittens properly. 4. A woman from the shelter came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens. 5. Finally, we were approved. 6. That was an exciting day!

Which is the best revision of sentence 4?

After that, a woman from the shelter came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens.

She came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens.

Finally, a woman from the shelter came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens.

I came our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens.

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Noe Navarro

25 October, 20:30

Ead the paragraph from Kevin's personal narrative.

1. When I was in fifth grade, my family became interested in fostering kittens from the local animal shelter. 2. First, we had to fill out an application. 3. Next, we had to attend a workshop on caring for kittens properly. 4. A woman from the shelter came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens. 5. Finally, we were approved. 6. That was an exciting day!

Which is the best revision of sentence 4?

After that, a woman from the shelter came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens.

She came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens.

Finally, a woman from the shelter came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens.

I came our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens.

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Danica Oneal · Answer 1

After that, a woman from the shelter came to our house to see if it was a safe environment for kittens. This is because you need to continue the sentence from the previous use of next.