Read the sentence from a student's essay about "The Treasure of Lemon Brown."

Greg sees his father differently after he speaks with Lemon Brown.

What revision should the student make to clarify the main idea of this sentence?

Replace "sees his father differently" with "appreciates his father."

Add the phrase "at the end of the story" after the word "differently."

Change the wording of "speaks with" to "has a conversation with."

Remove "after he speaks with Lemon Brown" from the sentence.

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Maddison Palmer

22 February, 09:21

Read the sentence from a student's essay about "The Treasure of Lemon Brown."

Greg sees his father differently after he speaks with Lemon Brown.

What revision should the student make to clarify the main idea of this sentence?

Replace "sees his father differently" with "appreciates his father."

Add the phrase "at the end of the story" after the word "differently."

Change the wording of "speaks with" to "has a conversation with."

Remove "after he speaks with Lemon Brown" from the sentence.

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Answers (2)

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Talan Brock · Answer 1

change it to appreciates his father

Explanation:

this is the phrase that gives deeper meaning to the story, and keeps the context the same without adding filler words

Keshawn Mendoza · Answer 2

I have literally no idea what this is asking?