To avoid wordiness, which is the BEST revision of this sentence from section four?

A) For big cats to be saved, we must work together.

B) For big cats, they must be saved by us working together.

C) For big cats to be saved, they must be all of us working together.

D) For cats to be saved, they must be saved by us working all together.

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Mya Garner

2 July, 04:32

To avoid wordiness, which is the BEST revision of this sentence from section four?

A) For big cats to be saved, we must work together.

B) For big cats, they must be saved by us working together.

C) For big cats to be saved, they must be all of us working together.

D) For cats to be saved, they must be saved by us working all together.

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Alf · Answer 1

A

Explanation:

The idea is to use the fewest words to express the thought accurately. Active voice is usually best. ("They must be saved by us." is passive voice- - so avoid it.)