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1 June, 19:24

So i'm writing a poem for English and I wanted to know if this is good?

Feeling

I can't seem to breathe

You don't have a clue

I can achieve

Anything

when I'm with you

I don't know this feeling

But with you they start revealing

When I'm hurt you pop out of nowhere

And make the pain disappear

Only you can make me happy

I like how you are classy

Maybe it's this teen thing

But it turns out you were apart of a silly dream

(at first it was supposed to be about being underwater, but since it's Valentines day, it turned into love.)

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  1. 1 June, 20:06
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    Silly and funny is ur answer
  2. 1 June, 21:42
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    Feeling

    I can't seem to breathe

    You don't have a clue

    I can achieve

    Anything

    when I'm with you

    I don't know this feeling

    But with you they start revealing

    When I'm hurt you pop out of nowhere

    And make the pain disappear

    Only you can make me happy

    I like how you are classy

    Maybe it's this teen thing

    But it turns out you were apart of a silly dream

    Response : This is very heartfelt. I enjoyed reading this. I also enjoyed how you went on to explain "Maybe it's this teen thing." This poem gets a 9/10 stars because it could be better, although it is amazing. You have a talent!
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