Consult an online dictionary and/or thesaurus to respond to the following prompt in a paragraph of 7 to 10 sentences.

Choose five words from five separate lines in the poem, "One Today" by Richard Blanco that you would have changed if you had been the original writer of this poem.

Write to explain what changes you would have made with these five word choices and why you would change them in this way.

Also explain how the use of the online dictionary and/or thesaurus assists you in making these choices.

From this story we can choose the next portions:

"One sky, towards which we sometimes lift our eyes." you can change lift to elevate cuase is more understandable

"we head home, through the gloss of rain or weight of snow."

lets change through to admist which seems a better expression

"Or the impossible vocabulary of sorrow that won’t explain," I changed impossible to unreachable cause it fits better.

"Who couldn’t give you what you wanted." You can change wanted to recieved. to denote the complete action of a gitf given

" My face, your face, millions of faces in morning's mirrors,

each one yawning to life, crescendoing into our day" change crescendoing for uplift to do it more understandable