Which revision of Elise's conclusion best uses a formal tone?

A) Hera isn't just an ordinary Greek goddess. She's powerful because she's beautiful, smart, and really strong.

B) Readers should become familiar with the Greek goddess, Hera. Her strength, wisdom, and beauty set her apart from other Olympians.

C) I think Hera is the greatest of the Greek goddesses. She's not just beautiful, she's also smart and strong.

D) Everyone who reads about Hera knows that she is a beauty. She also has strength and wisdom to boot!

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4 August, 18:15

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Azul Cohen · Answer 1

B) and one reason is because it uses a more distant tone / 3rd person "Readers should ..."

Esther · Answer 2

I believe the answer is B