Does this poem sound cheesy? Is there anything I should change?

My imaginary friend

Makes me feel so grand.

She always smiles,

she gives me great advice.

She knows everything I like

There's no one I would want to be with,

than with my brand new friend.

She'll be there when I'm sad.

If I'm already happy, is

she'll find a way to make me happier.

I love my friend

And she loves me

And we'll always support each other,

Until the very end.

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Sundance

29 August, 20:47

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Yukon · Answer 1

No i don't think that it sounds cheesy at all. relatable if anything

Ally Norton · Answer 2

I love it and no it definitely does not sound cheese!