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10 June, 00:22

I need and opinion. Is there anything I should change? Do you like it? Is it bad?

It's called Becoming a Warrior

You didn't give any devotion

Now I'm drowning in an ocean

Of a mast of pain an emotion.

The mixture of my feelings

Need an angel for healing

I need a knight

To teach me to become a warrior.

I need a fight

To someday be glorious.

I will be strong

Nothing can go wrong.

I'll do my best,

I won't even rest,

Till I reach the end.