Last night, Jason introduced me to a friend of his. Whose hair was all the way down to the back of his knees in a single dreadlock. is this sentence correct

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Macey Preston

7 December, 08:33

Last night, Jason introduced me to a friend of his. Whose hair was all the way down to the back of his knees in a single dreadlock. is this sentence correct

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Shawn Matthews · Answer 1

Incorrect sentence.

Corrected sentence: Last night, Jason introduced me to a friend of his, whose hair went all the way down to the back of his knees in a single dreadlock.

The period before the word "whose" in the original creates a fragment "Whose hair was all the way down to ... " This is a phrase which is describing "a friend of his" and should be included in the same sentence. So you simply separate it by a period.