Is the passage of dialogue written correctly or incorrectly?

Then she admitted, "I made a silly purchase. I bought a large stuffed animal."

"What's the problem with that?" Sally asked.

"It's too big to fit in my room," Erica replied.

A.

incorrectly

B.

correctly

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Sherlyn Ayers

5 February, 14:44

Is the passage of dialogue written correctly or incorrectly?

Then she admitted, "I made a silly purchase. I bought a large stuffed animal."

"What's the problem with that?" Sally asked.

"It's too big to fit in my room," Erica replied.

A.

incorrectly

B.

correctly

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Jaelynn Rosales · Answer 1

I would say A, based on the comma at the end of the third line, before the quotation mark. plus I would personally put a comma after the "purchase" instead of a period.

Is the passage of dialogue written correctly or incorrectly?Then she admitted, "I made a silly purchase. I bought a large stuffed animal.""What's the problem with that?" Sally asked."It's too big to fit in my room," Erica replied.A.incorrectlyB.correctly

Is the passage of dialogue written correctly or incorrectly?

Then she admitted, "I made a silly purchase. I bought a large stuffed animal."

"What's the problem with that?" Sally asked.

"It's too big to fit in my room," Erica replied.

A.

incorrectly

B.

correctly