Which revision fixes the dangling modifier in this sentence?

While walking to school almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow, the weather was miserable.

A. The weather was miserable while walking to school almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow.

B. Almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow, while I was walking to school, the weather was miserable.

C. While walking to school almost a mile in the heavy, wet snow, the weather was miserable.

D. While I was walking almost a mile to school, the weather was miserable, with wet, heavy snow.

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Deanna Bauer

7 July, 04:56

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Cody Oliver · Answer 1

It's most likely A. The weather was miserable while walking to school almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow.