Is this gramatically correct? "The place itself is important to me, although what really made it special was the relationships and memories I made there."

or

"The place itself is important to me. But what really made it special was the relationships and memories I made there."

if not how can I fix it.

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14 July, 07:03

Is this gramatically correct? "The place itself is important to me, although what really made it special was the relationships and memories I made there."

or

"The place itself is important to me. But what really made it special was the relationships and memories I made there."

if not how can I fix it.

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Kenny Lam · Answer 1

The second sentence is more correct due to the usage of the conjunction "but", however, the period should be replaced with a comma to make the sentence more flowing.

Is this gramatically correct? "The place itself is important to me, although what really made it special was the relationships and memories I made there."or"The place itself is important to me. But what really made it special was the relationships and memories I made there."if not how can I fix it.