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11 August, 18:36

There are six errors in this paragraph: The lusitania was the name of a ship. It was built in great Britian over a hundred years ago and make several trips across the atlantic. I'm 1915; it was hit with torpedos from a submarine. At the time, Britian was in a War with germany. Eighteen minutes after it was struck, the ship sank. (I found five, but I'm missing one.)

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  1. 11 August, 20:01
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    Didn't know what you meant ... I rewrote the paragraph

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    The Lusitania was a ship built in Great Britain, and it made several trips across the Atlantic. In 1915, Britain was in a middle of a war with Germany and the Lusitania was struck by torpedos. Eighteen minutes after the impact, the ship sank.

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    The Lusitania was the name of a ship. It was built in Great Britain over a hundred years ago and made several trips across the Atlantic. In 1915, Britain was in a war with Germany. Eighteen minutes after it was struck, the ship sank.
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