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Tristan Patterson

3 May, 16:51

Read the paragraph from a personal narrative.

1. I remember when Ben first had the idea for a community garden. 2. We were walking home from school past an old abandoned dirt lot. 3. Ben stood and stared through the fence for awhile lost in thought. 4. I thought he was acting strangely. 5. I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a shovel.

Which is the best revision of sentence 5?

A.) We were walking by the dirt lot again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a shovel.

B.) The following Saturday, I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a shovel.

C.) I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there he was digging up the dirt with a shovel.

D.) Finally, I was walking by the dirt lot again, and there was Ben digging up the dirt with a shovel.