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high school diploma is important to my future because the diploma will set the foundation to my future. To achieve my dream to become a abuse victims counselor. Also prove to myself that i can achieve this on my own. I also want to show my children that dropping out of school isn't the way to go. That if the want to achieve their there dreams they need to set the foundation by completing school and then to college. This is the way for me to achieve my dream and to watch my children achieve theirs. My high school diploma means independence for me to be able to support myself and get myself a house and a car to also support my family. this is why my high school is important to my future.

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Ernesto Beard

9 March, 17:00

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Stephanie Harrison · Answer 1

Put a comma after to achieve my dream, capitalize all I’s, and after independence put a comma.