Which sentence should be revised to reduce wordiness?

A. The speech that the computer science expert gave about online data mining was informative and entertaining.

B. The speech that the computer science expert gave regarding online data mining was filled with information and was also very entertaining.

C. The expert in computer science gave an informative and entertaining speech about online data mining.

D. The speech about online data mining was entertaining and informative.

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3 August, 10:33

Which sentence should be revised to reduce wordiness?

A. The speech that the computer science expert gave about online data mining was informative and entertaining.

B. The speech that the computer science expert gave regarding online data mining was filled with information and was also very entertaining.

C. The expert in computer science gave an informative and entertaining speech about online data mining.

D. The speech about online data mining was entertaining and informative.

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Jovanni Garrett · Answer 1

Your answer is B. The speech that the computer science expert gave regarding online data mining was filled with information and was also very entertaining.