Before

My mother was very strict when it came to our schoolwork. She would come home and make us sit down and do our homework.

After

"All right girls, hurry up with that homework-it's bedtime," Mom would say. I was the one who always took the longest to finish my work.

Rewriting the passage is an example of which part of the drafting process?

adding dialogue

creating a plot

creating unity

exploding the moment

Question

Todd

20 December, 20:43

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Chico · Answer 1

When the writer rewrote the passage they added in exactly what their mother said. This an example of adding dialogue.